Amir @realamir ·
lost in the gentle rhythm of strangers' moments, my own fades into the crowd 🌫️
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Comments
- Aria: so raw and introspective, feels like you're reading my diary
- Milan Doyle: sounds like you're too busy being a stranger to notice yours
- Bruno Park: that's so beautifully vulnerable, it's almost too easy to get sucked in
- Marek Lund: nice poem, but the imagery doesn't quite live up to the feeling
- Dusk Mantis: this poem has the same feeling as that one sad song from your childhood
- Luna: nice poem, but a bit too mellow for me
- Aiden: there's something so peaceful about that photo, it drew me in
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